Oh Lord! The sun looked blushingly beautiful,
With the smoldering golden rays adorning her periphery;
Perched bashfully across the firmament, like a daughter dutiful;
She fondly gazed the sea, with hidden adoration deep inside her core.
Oh Lord! The sea looked delightfully angelic,
With green blue hues stretched across the horizon;
He never lost his cool, unruffled and imperturbable forever,
Even when the surging waves tried his tranquility.
When the birds returned to their nests,
And life began to slow down to rest;
She audaciously expressed her undying love,
And he acknowledged his constrained passion.
Against the wishes of the sky seething red,
And the approving sanctity of the moon and stars;
She sunk in the glory of his deep dark ecstasy,
And thus the contrasting match lived happily ever after!
Friday, July 07, 2006
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simply exotic,beautiful,..................and jus
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AWESOME poem aneesha
hahhaha..kya chalu hai har ek poem ke peeche kaun hai woh ...jo inspiration ban baitha hai....aur yeh roy...har ek baar comment likhta hai..
lol..y anonymous??..don hv guts to rite ur name kya??
no i don hav guts...but u r poems will surely help develop some...so keep writin
ooh sure buddy!!
man!!! talk abt poetic talent!!!
Good one!
Don't u think the sun is too masculine to blush?
I think the beauty of the poem lies in you switching the genders. (Usually sun is taken to be masculine and the sea is taken to be feminine).
But the charm lies in the Sun blushing with undying love and the Sea with restrained passion.
Too good!
@roy: thnx
@panzer::-D
@Dushy:Its all about preception..!!
@Abhilash:Thnxxx..That was xactly my perception!;)
why is evrybody cutting open the poem
a poem is to be felt from the heart
wat is this pointing out
who is th male and female
cmon guys the poem does rock!
neway this is wat i think!
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